The Writers’ Retreat Newsletter
www.WritersRetreat.com
June 2009, Volume 9, No 2
 
 
In This Issue
 
· FROM THOUGHT TO PEN: GETTING THAT BOOK ON PAPER!
· THIRD ANNUALSCREENWRITING RETREAT AT PIKES PEAK, CO
·  MULTUM IN PARVO OR MUCH IN LITTLE
·  INTERESTED IN SETTING UP A RESIDENTIAL RETREAT?
 
Enter to win a seven-night stay at the Writer’ Retreat in Craftsbury, Vermont:
Win a free, seven-night stay at the Writers’ Retreat in Craftsbury, Vermont. To participate, send an actual postcard and explain briefly and legibly in the "message portion," the importance of reading and writing in your life during these difficult economic times. In the "address" portion of the postcard, please write your full name, mailing address, e-mail, and phone number. Mail the postcard in an envelope addressed to Julia Shipley, P.O. Box 29, Craftsbury, VT 05826. The envelope must be postmarked no later than July 1, 2009. The retreat may be scheduled any time before September 30, 2009, based on availability. The winner will be notified by July 10, 2009. The winner and the winning postcard will be printed in the fall issue of the Writer’s Retreat e-newsletter.
 
 
Greetings!
 
No matter the genre, we can only have a profitable writing venture if we dream first, then structure our thoughts and write from the heart. Imagine your book already finished. Think about the benefits gained; respect from colleagues, additional income—visualize your readers telling their friends about your novel/book. Imagine the excitement of signing your book for a reader.
Take your writing dream off the shelf now. If you wait, it could be another year, then another, before you start, or maybe if you wait too long, you may not start at all! You know your subject and the audience is waiting.
 
Contact www.WritersRetreat.com then select a mentor and one of our retreats in Canada, the United States, Costa Rica, or France—the perfect environment in which to begin.
 
Our mentors and retreats are here to make your writing dream come true. Contact one of them now!
 
- Micheline Côté, The Writers’ Retreat.
 
 
 
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 FROM THOUGHT TO PEN: GETTING THAT BOOK ON PAPER!
By Adilah Barnes
 
Many writers contemplate writing a book but are unsure of how to attempt such a seemingly monumental feat. It can feel a bit overwhelming as to where to start. The same was true with me.
 
But, we can find our way.
 
Mine was a three-year process with my now completed Essence Magazine bestseller nonfiction book released in December 2008. Perhaps a glimpse of my sojourn may serve as a way of supporting others who are at a crossroad in terms of how to approach the actual journey of sitting down to start that book.
 
It seems to me that the first step is to decide what the writer REALLY wants to write about. What is it that is burning inside that needs to be expressed and that must have value to a reader?
 
For me, my former acting students at the American Conservatory Theatre in San Francisco had planted the seed in the mid-1980s. They gave me a white, dried flower-covered hardback book with a slip of paper inside that everyone had signed giving me the charge to use that book when I decided I was ready to “write my acting book.”
 
At that time, I did not intend to write a book. I did not envision putting all my teaching knowledge together systematically in the format of a “how to” acting book. At that time, I taught in the classroom. I had no thought of expanding my classroom to teach through the written word.
 
Fast forward.
 
In 2005, I felt the time had finally come to tackle writing this thing called an acting book. What I learned as I sat down to begin writing was that a traditional acting book was not coming easy. Though I had taught acting for twenty-seven years, I did not know where to start. The truth was, I could not think of what I might say that the acting teacher masters such as Stanislavski, Hagen, Strasberg, Meisner, Spolin, and others had not already given breath and pen to.
 
What new insights did I have that would make an actor also pick MY book up?
 
I spoke with a fellow actor, Brandilyn Amie, and shared with her that I also wanted to include my experiences from my internationally toured, one-woman show. At that embryonic stage of development, I felt there was no place to include that part of my journey. That chapter of my creative life did not seem to fit writing an acting book.
 
However, Brandilyn gave me the advice I needed. She said, “You can do that, too.” In that eureka moment, I realized my book would use my life’s journey as the backdrop for the lessons and inspirations that might give insight and motivation to another. I decided to use each chapter to focus on a different time along my path. 
 
I would also learn later from my many readers that my book also had crossover value beyond the actor who might be reading it. Some found it motivational, inspirational, informative, and even of archival value.
 
Once I was clear on my approach to content, I decided on the title. I am a writer navigated by titles. For example, my one-woman show, I Am That I Am: Woman, Black spoke to my vision of creating a solo show portraying African American women through time. The title for me held a sense of pride, and at the same time, the title gave a sense of statistical value of who the women were ethnically.
 
The same became true with my “acting book.” Once I found the title ON MY OWN TERMS One Actor’s Journey, I became clear that this book would connect my creative dots along the way as an acting teacher, producer, talk show host, and retreat proprietor. What the reader learns about my personal life is incidental to the purpose of my book.
 
For me, finding my titles defines my themes, parameters, and core of my work. For other writers, a title becomes the last step of the work. Choosing a title for your book becomes the icing on the cake for many. For me, the title is the compass that guides me along my way.
 
Which approach works best for you?
 
For me, because my book was about my life’s story as an artist, I wrote each chapter chronologically. I began with childhood memories and recounted my evolutionary steps along the way. This approach served me well because I was able to use real time from my past as a structural device to move my story forward.
 
For some who are writing from the bones, they are fueled by a particular time in their lives that is rich in sensory and emotional recall. It could actually be a moment from adulthood. These writers begin wherever “there” is, and go from one memory to the next without any regard for chronology of experiences at all.
 
Whatever approach works, works. What is most important is getting the work down on paper without editing.. I suggest just getting the story out, no matter how raw and unvarnished the recollections and the wording. There will be plenty of time for the rewrites before that moment of opening the mail to find the completed galley copy.
 
Stay on the journey!
 
Adilah Barnes can be reached by e-mail at abpro1@sbcglobal.net at the retreat in Sharpsburg, Georgia.
 
 
 THIRD ANNUAL SCREENWRITING RETREAT AT THE FOOT OF PIKES PEAK, COLORADO
Script consultant and author, Dr. Linda Seger will host her third annual screenwriting retreat in Cascade, Colorado on October 8–11, 2009. The retreat is limited to six writers, who bring either scripts or treatments of their film ideas to the retreat. Participants read each others’ work, and Linda then spends half a day with each project, discussing and analyzing it with the author and recommending how to address problem areas. Other writers also add their comments.
 
Linda began her script consulting business in 1981, based on her dissertation, “What makes a script work?” From this project, she developed a method of analyzing the strengths and weaknesses of a script. This led to her working on film and television scripts in Hollywood. She has consulted on more than two thousand media projects, and more than one hundred produced films. She has given seminars on screenwriting in thirty-one countries, and trained script consultants in New Zealand, Germany, Austria, Scandinavia, and Italy.
 
The retreat will be held at Linda’s log home in Cascade, Colorado, a small town in the Rocky Mountains just five miles west of Colorado Springs. The road to the top of Pikes Peak originates in Cascade and the town is famous for North Pole attractions. (yes… Santa lives across the road from Linda). The area boasts many fine restaurants where participants can dine and interact outside the classroom.
 
Visit Linda’s Web site at www.lindaseger.com to read comments participants have made about the retreat, and to help you select lodging from among several charming Bed & Breakfast facilities located within walking distance of Linda’s home.
 
For more information or to register online, go to www.writersretreat.com and click on Workshops. To reach Linda Seger, send an e-mail to lsseger@aol.com
 
 
MULTUM IN PARVO OR MUCH IN LITTLE
Elizabeth Gilbert summarized her runaway best seller in three words (also the title): Eat Pray Love.
 
After a craze of autobiographies expressed in six words or less swept the Web, a book showcasing the best utilized one for its title, "Not what I was expecting."
 
Michael Pollan began an article about nutrition in the New York Times Magazine with a seven-word synopsis of the piece: "Eat Food. Not too much. Mostly plants."
 
And as you probably know, Twitter, the on-line social network restricts its communicants to 140 character expressions of being. "I am …"
 
Where am I going with this?
I am building up to the premise that engaging in a word diet may be just the thing your novel, screenplay, article, dissertation, or epic poem needs to revitalize it. Once, when I was struggling and lost in all the material I had amassed for an article I was writing, my editor consoled me. "In one sentence, tell me what this piece is about. Then look at all your other sentences. If they don't relate or support that statement, discard them."
 
Just as journalists capture the essence of what they are writing in a "nut graph" or nutshell paragraph, distilling your story or point may help you reorient when you have gone astray, may help you return when you have digressed, or may help you clarify when all's gone muddy.
 
After poet Ted Kooser was treated for cancer, he began writing one poem a day on a postcard and mailing it to his friend Jim Harrison. The result is the book, Early Morning Walks, a collection of brief, but breathtaking poems.
 
Three words, six words, a tweet, a nutgraf, a postcard … next time you are stymied, try to express the gist of your project in the briefest way, and in doing so, reconnect with the power and reason for your writing. Then keep writing!    
 
Julia Shipley can be reached by e-mail at jshipley@writersretreat.com. She welcomes you at her retreat in Craftsbury, VT.
 
OPENING A WRITER’S RETREAT IN YOUR AREA
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